Alchemist

Hi there, this is Alchemist from the "Adopt a novel club"! I'm here to do the review on a novel I chose to adopt! :D I will start out with ...

Hello! You have continued the good work from the first part of the story. It is great how now you had shown how, when there is a chance to abuse ...

Hi there! Sorry to hear it is your last work, you are really talented writer. Lest start. This story reminded me of Kafka's "Process". Which is kinda great compliment since ...

Hello, glad you were so fast with this! :) What an interesting chapter. This is the first time we get a Villian POV, heh? You did reveal so, so much ...

Hi there! This is an interesting and informative chapter. I'd like to praise your dialogue a little bit: it is great and helping reader get into the formalities. I think ...

Hi there! You've got plenty of reviews down there, and I don't think I've found anything to complain about, so if you are not interested in the praise you can ...

Hi there, I'm here for the reveiw! I need to suggest you to proof read this, and correct the puntuation, capital letters, etc. You should follow some rules, since this ...

Hello Noelle, you know very well why I'm here (spamspamspam :D). This is really great chapter. Actually, for quite some time I have a feeling I'm reading an actuall novel ...

Heyyy! Bro! :D At first I was confused while reading this, so I almost left it before the end... but that is also becouse you sometimes have phrases and words ...

Hi there! This is well written, and full of characters. But this chapter alone doesn't say much about your plot, which I would like to know. I mean, even most ...

Hey there! I'm glad I found yet another tryhard-fantasy novelists like me! :) Here goes the review. I've decided to review it without the reading first of the chapters becouse ...

Hi there! I'm glad you wrote this, since it's always good to see another person's POV on such an important topic. Yet, I can tell you that I'm very confused. ...

Hello! I'm glad that you finished your next chapter. This one is quite exciting too! You've made quite a plot within the two chapers: Nebes question, Krad war and that ...

Hi, reviewing now! First, you should fix the grammar issues birkhoof has pointed out. It doesn't matter that much, as long as story is readable, but you could make it ...

Hello there! I see that this chapter didn't get much love, so I came here. Actually there isn't very much to revieiw here. Since you are native english speaker, it's ...