Alchemist

Hi Noelly! I think this is the right place for Falyn to start hating her dad, if you wanted that to be present in your story at all, or at ...

Heya, guess who's back! xD I kinda didn't expect him and Samuel meeting up so soon. The reason is because it revealed to us so much. For an example, you ...

Heya! I'm finally here on this beautiful review day to give feedback on a novel I've adopted! :D There is one thing that bothers me though: what are barbarians doing ...

Heya, I just 'revenged' Noelle for a previous review day spam, I'm here to do the same with you! Though, I'm only one chapter behind in your story! I was ...

Heya! Here I am! Wow, she has no respect for her dad. And he doesn't have respect for her. You know it bothers me so much. I would have never ...

Heya Noelly, Noellie! :D U know why am here. So Falyn here pointed out that, now that they left Agathi, Sam looked like a completely different person. So far, readers ...

Heya! I'm here for the r-day review! And because I want to review this, too. xD So, this was somewhat strange chapter. Interesting pacing and fight, but strange. First, why ...

Heya, spam time! :) I think this was the messy one. It just felt reading through this one like it was not thought through as much as the other chapters ...

Remember all that spam you gave me the last reveiw day? Well, guess whos here to "revenge"! :D Huh, four hours to reach the lightport! That means only one thing: ...

Hello, I'm here to do a review(duh xD). I like the theme you picked, it is quite mature, yet it might be overlooked. It's just an everyday thing, this heroism ...

Heya, I'm here for the review as promised! First of all, this isn't an essay, this is a short story. No problems at all though. I like this work, but ...

HI! NO MORE PATTERNS! I'm here to review your marvellous work because I WANT TO. So, I really enjoyed this. I won't really comment on this finishing chapter, it's all ...

Hyah, Hello! I'm here for both "Adopt a novel" and a Review day review! :) What a heartbreaking story. I mean, my chest is pounding as I read this. I'm ...

HEY THIS CHAPTER! Hello! I'm here for both "Adopt a novel" and a Review day review! :) again this shit. So, it turns out I was right about most of ...

Heya back to it Hello! I'm here for both "Adopt a novel" and a Review day review! :) HA! This chapter was ridiculous. And it made me feel happy for ...