Albatrossity

Hilarious! I actually did later on turn this piece into a song - I recorded it with a friend :)

Perhaps these changes to the first couple passages make it feel less rushed, Newa? By the way, I, too am new to YWS..bout a week old. Welcome, and I hope ...

Thanks, the critique is much appreciated. It did sting a bit, because this was a piece written out of honesty, which I honestly thought turned out to be one of ...

Thanks, the critique is much appreciated. It did sting a bit, because this was a piece written out of honesty, which I honestly thought turned out to be one of ...

I'm not sure what to think about this, either: but the silence shrieks of missing spots those gaps in our accomplishments and all i fake is guiltlessness What is the ...

I love the imagery you've created in this piece, Dreamwalker! Although some of it, I'm unsure of. The fluorescent greens and blues you tell of seem to have something more ...