Ahnleh

I really liked this. I thought it was fun to read, even if it did take a moment to get used to. I really like how the left side could ...

I really liked this. I like shorter poems most of the time and I really connected with this piece. I think my favorite bit has to be: You hide everything ...

I really loved this! I laughed at the end because I can see my parents doing that to me. I do agree that the moral wasn't in the same style ...

I liked this piece. With a lot of the other songs, poems, etc. that explain what awful things are going on in their lives, they say things like asking why ...

This is really good, and I'm excited to see if anything more happens with the Lavena bit. There are only a few typos that I caught that you should probably ...

This is really good work. I love the story line and can't wait to see how it all plays out. :) There are a few small typos that I would ...