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Re: Deleted
Wow..... That was an EPIC beginning for a story!!!! I sincerely enjoyed the way you portrayed the character. As it was in a good and well constructed story, you made ...
Sep 16, 2011 -
Re: The Stranger (Chapters 2-3)
Your Short Story was very image full and exuberant to read. What i don't prefer is the exaggeration of this story as the original version might be quite better. Punctuation: ...
Aug 14, 2011 -
Re: Stimulated Insanity Chapter 2
Well done! That is a great beginning to a wonderful story! keep going and that story is going to be just fabulous. Your Punctuation is good and you creativeness is ...
Jul 16, 2011 -
Re: The pretense of a happy family
Wow ..... That is really good!! Keep going ! i'm looking forward to the rest of your work!
Jul 16, 2011