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Re: Hidden- Chapter Three
This story was very intriguing. It made me feel like i was actually with them in their adventures. The grammar and punctuation were fantastic as well as your story line. ...
Sep 16, 2011 -
Re: Portrait of a Healing Heart
Well Done, this is a well constructed story that really seems like a ' portrait of a healing heart.' You could work on you grammatical terms like commas and full ...
Sep 16, 2011 -
Re: The Collectors (part 4)
Really Well Done!!! Your grammar and punctuation were perfect in my opinion and your storyline was fantastic! Generally, I really enjoyed your story and the characters inside it. The story ...
Aug 14, 2011 -
Re: Safe (Part 3)
Wow.... That was AMAZING! Even i couldn't write a short story like that. What i would say to improve it is just use less of the vulgar language and expressions. ...
Aug 14, 2011 -
Re: Stay in School!
That's an Epic Poem to write when your bored! Grammar, spelling and punctuation are all good and I do like the carefree and Simplicitness of that poem! P.s I think ...
Jul 16, 2011