AgentChameleon

This story was very intriguing. It made me feel like i was actually with them in their adventures. The grammar and punctuation were fantastic as well as your story line. ...

Well Done, this is a well constructed story that really seems like a ' portrait of a healing heart.' You could work on you grammatical terms like commas and full ...

Really Well Done!!! Your grammar and punctuation were perfect in my opinion and your storyline was fantastic! Generally, I really enjoyed your story and the characters inside it. The story ...

Wow.... That was AMAZING! Even i couldn't write a short story like that. What i would say to improve it is just use less of the vulgar language and expressions. ...

That's an Epic Poem to write when your bored! Grammar, spelling and punctuation are all good and I do like the carefree and Simplicitness of that poem! P.s I think ...