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  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Samodiva

    Well, here we have quite a typical piece of exposition. As the beginning of the story, your aim here is of course to establish interest in the story by finding ...

    Dec 6, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Reign Of Love

    Well, that was quite a long "short story"! You've clearly put work into it. As such, I'm sure you'll want it to be as good as it can and I ...

    Nov 11, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Killer Night

    Hello. Now, while I suppose the "right" thing to do would be to scold you for being distracted enough from your history lesson to be able to write a story, ...

    Nov 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Iron Bars

    I have somewhat conflicting emotions regarding this poem. On one hand the imagery you've used seems to be clichéd ("You took my day and left me the night"; "Only my ...

    Nov 7, 2011


But answer me this: how can a story end happily if there is no love?
— Kate DiCamillo, The Miraculous Journey of Edward Tulane