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Re: Samodiva
Well, here we have quite a typical piece of exposition. As the beginning of the story, your aim here is of course to establish interest in the story by finding ...
Dec 6, 2011 -
Re: The Reign Of Love
Well, that was quite a long "short story"! You've clearly put work into it. As such, I'm sure you'll want it to be as good as it can and I ...
Nov 11, 2011 -
Re: Killer Night
Hello. Now, while I suppose the "right" thing to do would be to scold you for being distracted enough from your history lesson to be able to write a story, ...
Nov 8, 2011 -
Re: Iron Bars
I have somewhat conflicting emotions regarding this poem. On one hand the imagery you've used seems to be clichéd ("You took my day and left me the night"; "Only my ...
Nov 7, 2011
