Afyr

I've rewritten this prologue. It should be on this link I've changed quite a few things on it.

It's good. I've only done one sonnet myself-I'm not ecstatic about them, especially the rules you must follow.... :o That being said, the only thing that would technically need fixing, ...

I think it flows very well, apart from the last line. It seems missplaced, maybe because it doesn't rhyme with anything else... But I'm not sure.

'Fixed'. (I hate things when they have huge spaces between them. Especially speech.)