Aeropostale

One quick thing. You sure use f--- a lot... I think it might be overused.

I said thank you because he pointed me to my room. He had helped me out in my stay at the HQ. I also understand the pace issue. This is ...

Holy WOW! That is long. Sorry but I am not a serious reader, so I won't be reading it all. At first, I was going to say that the SOUND ...

What you said... xD Thanks for the review. I really appreciate it.

Firstly I love war stories/films. I am not a big grammar nerd this the main thing I spotted. The relentless woodlands of Northern Vietnam were almost too much to bear ...

This is interesting! It has a personal feel to it even though it is fictional. You should carry on with this and make it into a story about a girl ...

Interesting entry. These is a little confusing because I don't usually read this kind of writing. Nice job though! :)

Quite lengthy. Keep it up!

Haha! This is hilarious. Keep it up! These are so funny, I cracked up on the spot. The spandex thing = GENIOUS. Sorry if I sound insane, but this is ...

Adequate poem. This doesn't have much of a rhythm to it, but it is a good base. Keep writing on and you will soon find your path.

After I edited the ending to the story, I added a completely different story! I hope you like it! I know I did. :)

Chapter 3 is out if you would like to read it, anyone! It is the most action-packed chapter yet. It will surely meet your needs! Well, possibly. :P

Chapter 3 is now out, if you would like to check it out! :) I think it is the most action-packed chapter yet.

Also, I would recommend that you add more to it. This is more of a prologue than a first chapter. Just change the name to Modern to Medieval - Prologue ...

What you said. :P I understand what you mean. This chapter was in a rush. I was bored and felt like putting some serious action into it! I am going ...