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Re: I never like my name
Brilliant, absolutely brilliant! This is a very imaginative short story. I hope. :P Great job with the storyline and everything! This is very interesting and it shows how people can ...
Jan 11, 2011 -
Re: Hunter..Or Hunted? (part of chapter one)
My name is Chelsea Groves. I hear the screams of the dying, the living calling to their friends, and the sound of ripping flesh, as the vampires massacred the innocents. ...
Jan 11, 2011 -
Re: Modern to Medival prologue
Awesome story! I do believe you rushed it though. The plot is very interesting, and will definitely attract some readers. The main problem that I see is that there are ...
Jan 11, 2011 -
Re: Wheelman
Well, the chapters are extremely short. You also cannot tell who is saying what... These are most of the errors. Interesting storyline though. Lots of shootings. Haha, also there was, ...
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: Prologue- Iris Carter
This is the best story I have read on this website! Just like the post above, I was immersed from the first letter to the last period! This is a ...
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: Nobles and Beggars *Part 1*
Damion Kale lounged comfortably in a gilded chair of brass - I find that gilded means gold-plated. Why not just make it gold? - , the needle-sharp point of a ...
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: Break
Awesome idea! I am not claiming a rip, but this is kind of similar to Call of Duty: Black Ops. In the campaign, Alex Mason is interrogated in a sub-lethal ...
Jan 6, 2011