Aedomir

Well said Kang! He thinks he is so good. It is a combination of LotR, Star Wars and the Dragon Rider chronicles. Oh, and rubbish. :wink: -Mark

Yes, :-) I think this should be locked now, unless you want to be a fool for another 11 DAYS! -Mark

Thanks Jack. I was unsure about the whole descriptive piece, maybe I should have gone for more plot... Thanks once again, -Mark

I'm reading it now, it's great! Such an original style. I love it.

Paolini is one of those writers you just want to grab my the neck, strangle and scream at, while burning his manuscipts and books, throwing Lord of the Rings at ...

Wow thank you everyone! Thanks very much and great advice. I must edit this :wink:. Thanks! -Mark

Thanks, Runawaythoughts. You might nto want to tell people that, but I will give your piece a look.

You cynic, ha!

Thank you for the reviews everyone! Mortality >> I would be more grateful if you could expand onto why you didn't like it, as it stands it isn't ver helpful. ...

Thanks Azila! I missed all those sily mistakes, thanks. I noticed I do a lot of telling actually, I really need to expand that. Thanks very much, ~Mark {edited, again!}

Thank you very much! I am proud of myself now :-D

I love it! That was briliantly bad that it was... good!

Thank you! It doesn't make sense because there is a crucial chapter before this that I haven't posted. The two men in the hut were supposed to be the new ...

Tut tut... do I sense a lack of Lord of the Rins loyalty here? Hehe, just kidding. I must read this, it looks great.

Aedomir--WTF stands for What The F*** I know that, but I was wondering how it was relevant, but I am sure it is, hehe!