Aedomir

I said I would read it didn't I? Sorry, I've been a bit busy to say the least. 'youngest member of the Billington family' You've already said Billington, try just ...

You played about with the title... Unnamed must have taken ages to think of lol :-D I really liked this poem, its pretty cool! 'If you ask me my name, ...

Hiya there! Bah, I like the title! It sounds alright. Cool first sentence there, I liked it. Well, I came here expecting a long line of gramar issues, but was ...

Heya! I came here to crit, but I just loved the way you narrated this: 'I am that unforgettable, unforgivable time in the hole between space and reason when nothing ...

Heya! It was Icarus who went too close to the sun, as Poem menntioned. Immalleable is spelt like that isn't it? 2 L's Anyway, overall, I liked this story and ...

I'm really sorry I just can't reivew this without spaces, pu tsome in and I will gladly pay a visit! Keep writing though, I am sure it is great lol ...

Wow! That's really good! I especially liked the firts entry, I didn't feel as though I was being overloded with info (but be careful not to do that bty!). Just ...

Hi Kook! Welcome to YWS there! I am not very good with poetry, but will share with my thoughts. I like the structure and the idea behind it, but I ...

Hiya! Part 3 already? 'My sister… Emma, she whom disappeared two years ago has been found' I could be wrong, but that in bold I think is a bit unnecessary. ...

Hiya! I agree with others here about calling someone and not knowing why. Its an easy way around a weak storyline. Make this a bit stronger, give her a reason ...

This was very confusing, and it all seems a little poetic. I mean, I liekd it, but don't you think perhaps it may seem too intense for a story, as ...

Hiya! I really liked it, its mysterious, strange and certainly not too short. It adds a nice bit of suspense for the first few lines, and I can't see anything ...

Everything that you write really, I could just here you saying. It was very realistic, so well done on that! I would agree with others though, when I say it ...

Hiya there! 'I groaned and turned my head, but that seemed to be the only thing that obeyed me. My eyes wouldn’t even open, I felt so weighed down. There ...

Heya there clock! First off, did you make that poem? If he did, its great! And if you didn't, its still pretty good anyway :-D 'Inside room HE-3 there was ...