AdventurerDaniel

Everyone else is being extremely long so I'll keep it short sweet and to the point I liked it, it was a fun read. But, it was difficult to read ...

I really liked this poem but at the same time the wording confused and baffled me but for some odd reason it did seem to some up the heat of ...

I loved this poem I wish it was just a bit longer I would love to turn this song into a poem it deserves it the rhyme scheme is perfect ...

I loved it though I would suggest shortening some lines for a more aesthetically pleasing look otherwise it flows very well and tells a great story.