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Adu05

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: 200 Feet

    Hi! I love this poem and the thought behind it and personally, I think the best poems are those written about personal experiences. While I don't know the full story ...

    Oct 19, 2020
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: The Insignificant

    Hi! I love this poem and the message it is trying to convey and I think that the idea behind making it a conversation between the river and the mountain ...

    Oct 19, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The sea, a piece of my heart

    Hi! I really like this poem in all its simplicity and the feeling of peace it gives out. I noticed that the third stanza has five lines while the others ...

    Jun 30, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Blame

    Hi! This poem while being simple is very powerful and hard- hitting. The straightforward nature of the language you used really brought out the emotions in every single line. While ...

    Jun 29, 2020
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: The Mechanical Mirror

    Hi! I think this is a really good poem with a lot of feeling packed into every line. As i was reading, i noticed that the stanzas were a bit ...

    Jun 26, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: i have never seen the ocean

    Hi! I really like this poem and the emotions you've embedded in every line. The formatting really adds to the meaning of the poem and creates a strong impression on ...

    Jun 19, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: When Somebody Dies

    i really like this poem because you've conveyed a sense of grief and sadness in a really unique way. The lines "A lingering spirit will rot the foundations / or ...

    Jun 18, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Kites and Starry Nights

    I really love these two poems and the way they convey so much feeling in such a short space! I felt that the comparison between the sky and the sea ...

    Jun 17, 2020


You walk into this room at your own risk, because it leads to the future, not a future that will be but one that might be. This is not a new world, it is simply an extension of what began in the old one. It has patterned itself after every dictator who has ever planted the ripping imprint of a boot on the pages of history since the beginning of time. It has refinements, technological advances, and a more sophisticated approach to the destruction of human freedom. But like every one of the super states that preceded it, it has one iron rule: logic is an enemy and truth is a menace.
— Rod Serling