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Adu05

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: 200 Feet

    Hi! I love this poem and the thought behind it and personally, I think the best poems are those written about personal experiences. While I don't know the full story ...

    Oct 19, 2020
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: The Insignificant

    Hi! I love this poem and the message it is trying to convey and I think that the idea behind making it a conversation between the river and the mountain ...

    Oct 19, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The sea, a piece of my heart

    Hi! I really like this poem in all its simplicity and the feeling of peace it gives out. I noticed that the third stanza has five lines while the others ...

    Jun 30, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Blame

    Hi! This poem while being simple is very powerful and hard- hitting. The straightforward nature of the language you used really brought out the emotions in every single line. While ...

    Jun 29, 2020
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: The Mechanical Mirror

    Hi! I think this is a really good poem with a lot of feeling packed into every line. As i was reading, i noticed that the stanzas were a bit ...

    Jun 26, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: i have never seen the ocean

    Hi! I really like this poem and the emotions you've embedded in every line. The formatting really adds to the meaning of the poem and creates a strong impression on ...

    Jun 19, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: When Somebody Dies

    i really like this poem because you've conveyed a sense of grief and sadness in a really unique way. The lines "A lingering spirit will rot the foundations / or ...

    Jun 18, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Kites and Starry Nights

    I really love these two poems and the way they convey so much feeling in such a short space! I felt that the comparison between the sky and the sea ...

    Jun 17, 2020


Daddy Long Legs are more closely related to crabs than spiders and somehow the idea of crablike creatures with spider legs that have escaped the entrappings of the primordial sea and now crawl over land and can walk up and down walls and ceilings creeps me more than I can adequately describe.
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