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Re: 200 Feet
Hi! I love this poem and the thought behind it and personally, I think the best poems are those written about personal experiences. While I don't know the full story ...
Oct 19, 2020 -
Re: The Insignificant
Hi! I love this poem and the message it is trying to convey and I think that the idea behind making it a conversation between the river and the mountain ...
Oct 19, 2020 -
Re: The sea, a piece of my heart
Hi! I really like this poem in all its simplicity and the feeling of peace it gives out. I noticed that the third stanza has five lines while the others ...
Jun 30, 2020 -
Re: Blame
Hi! This poem while being simple is very powerful and hard- hitting. The straightforward nature of the language you used really brought out the emotions in every single line. While ...
Jun 29, 2020 -
Re: The Mechanical Mirror
Hi! I think this is a really good poem with a lot of feeling packed into every line. As i was reading, i noticed that the stanzas were a bit ...
Jun 26, 2020 -
Re: i have never seen the ocean
Hi! I really like this poem and the emotions you've embedded in every line. The formatting really adds to the meaning of the poem and creates a strong impression on ...
Jun 19, 2020 -
Re: When Somebody Dies
i really like this poem because you've conveyed a sense of grief and sadness in a really unique way. The lines "A lingering spirit will rot the foundations / or ...
Jun 18, 2020 -
Re: Kites and Starry Nights
I really love these two poems and the way they convey so much feeling in such a short space! I felt that the comparison between the sky and the sea ...
Jun 17, 2020
