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  • Poetry » General, General Re: I remember that one time...

    Unless you count the devil romantic, then I this isn't that. Thanks for the review!

    Jun 30, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I remember that one time...

    Thanks for the review!

    Jun 30, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I remember that one time...

    Thanks for the review! I'll fix be sure to fix the things. How do you think I should fix the internet thing? Could you expand on that?

    Jun 30, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I remember that one time...

    Thanks for reviewing! I will be certain to try to change some things. With the last stanza though, I was trying to add the theme of what the main character ...

    Jun 30, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I remember that one time...

    Thanks for reviewing! I will be sure to modify my poem. I will see if I can improve the internet history part. Here is a hint for who HE is(The ...

    Jun 30, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I remember that one time...

    Okay! Thanks for reviewing! Would adorable be a good sub for cute? Also how could I make the internet thing fit in? I really want it in here *hugs sentence*. ...

    Jun 30, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I remember that one time...

    This isnt romance. XD

    Jun 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Love

    could you explain your way of understanding?

    Jun 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Corps of Recovery: Part 13

    I was really surprised! I don't know how to execute a death well either but I think you did a good job!

    Jun 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: i played you my favorite song

    awww. I am just saying that as a suggestion...

    Jun 30, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Twinkle Twinkle Little Spy

    Don't do drugs just because everyone else does them. XD (drugs being and or buts at the beginning of a sentence)

    Jun 30, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, Other Re: Leopard Girl

    I didn't tell her to like it...........Well she was bragging all about it when she wrote it, so I made her like it! XD

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Narrative Re: Pokemon Ultimate Evolution Season 2: Episode 15, Family Over Love

    That sounds really cool! :D

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Spring

    XD I am friends with my school bus driver too. This clears things up quite a bit.

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: persona

    XD I'm American but my parents are from Russia. You should always try to organize your poem but some don't have to be cut into stanzas. You just have know ...

    Jun 29, 2014


Cheat your landlord if you can and must, but do not try to shortchange the Muse. It cannot be done. You can’t fake quality any more than you can fake a good meal.
— William S. Burroughs