Achitaka

Gotcha, I that case I have quite a few good ideas in how to change this story up a bit. I get writting it here pretty soon. Thanks this helps ...

When you tell the reader something instead of showing it, you do a few things that can be detrimental to your story. First, you rob the reader of the creative ...

It`s a well written piece of art is all I can really say... *Goes and crys in the corner for a little bit*