Achitaka

Okay is the warrior in this story immortal or something? He got his abdoman torn open, and fought a dragon for an entire month? I`m just wondering this because it ...

Okay I have been reading your Fanfic since it began but I have just been to lazy to post anything so... here I go. Okay the biggest problem I see ...

This is a well written piece of work you have here. The flashbacks are really interesting, it`s like the character is going down memory lane barefoot but memory lane is ...