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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Bruised Arms, Scarred Heart

    Hey, I like how as I read your poem I got multiple flashbacks of abused women and outraged husbands, its almost as if the poem comes to life in a ...

    Aug 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Body vs. Mind

    Hey there. I really appreciate the symbolism here and the internal war involved. The concept is rather magnificent, as from its micro standing it paralells the worlds main problem--disagreement. This ...

    Aug 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: War of Contradiction

    I’m loving the depth behind this poem. The world being divided into black, grey and white is without question—true. I often find myself in the grey gazing at either side ...

    Aug 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: At The Tongue of The Critic

    I take it that, you've had some bad encounters with some hollow critics who only wished to bring you down rather than roughly rake you up...anyways...even in this there is ...

    Aug 6, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Now a Skeleton

    Excellent piece of work! I absolutely agree with the concept and the purpose behind it. Most of our damage is self inflicted and it rarely comes from an external source, ...

    Aug 6, 2011


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