Absynthe

Ok i thought this was very good and enjoyable but it had alot of mistakes. :smt040 He needed to get to Qahz Palace before King Xano began to worry, and ...

LOL no prob!! any time! If you pm me the next time u post something that needs reveiwing ill be sure to!! :elephant: :smt068 :smt100 :smt072 :smt026

Hey!!! i REALLY like this. Don't give yourself a hard time, i liked it alot. so what? it took a year. Drapes of sheer darkness hung over the windows OK ...

Ok no offence, but IM offended. tht kinda screws everything. i am a HUGE fan of twilight and that kinda made my feelings hurt. i think that the movie is ...

Hmmm this sounds really cool. and no offense, it sounds like the opening of a video game. I acctually like the fact that it sounds like that, but try to ...

Hey, i like you story but.... there are just a few things i dislike. Anyway, where was I? Oh, yes,[/u] Cindy. Cindy works for our school magazine, the Sneaky Slipper, ...

hey this sounds really cool!! i have a suggestion, though. Not one to leave anything to chance, he summoned the essence of light and molded the light of the lantern ...

hey!! i really like your story!!! its a little strange but good. I personally liked your descriptions, while sombody said otherwise. keep it up, thought i should say that you ...