Abigail_W.

Thanks for all the great comments! Thanks for the advice, Jasmine Hart, and I'll consider "scars caused by a good deed," but I'd prefer to keep "such," because, if you ...

I believe that the reason nobody commented on this before was because you left us completely and utterly speechless. Enough said.

Hi Adameagle! I like this piece, although it doesn't really feel like poetry to me. The informal attitude makes it seem more like lyrics to a rap song or something, ...

The premise of this poem is excellent, I think that vote should be unanimous. I just didn't really understand the structure of this poem. Was it supposed to be a ...

Do you think I ought to submit this to a publication website I know?

I enjoyed the overall ease and flow of this song. I am glad you chose to post this as lyrics instead of as a poem, because one can see where ...

Oh my! Your similies are simply astounding. I couldn't think of one improvement. Enough said.

I apologize for this post, but my computer was taking it's sweet time to load, so I hit the "Submit" button twice. I edited out my comment on this one, ...

I believe this topic is unanimously agreed upon. Nobody wants to hear about the lethargic, passive attitude of the poet. Rather, they would like to hear what triggered him not ...

This story isn't in poetry because it doesn't have the right format. It's about living with a drugged mother, and, one day, waking up to see her lying on the ...

You have just taken a cliche and overused idea and made it your own. Applaud yourself. Who would ever think to use smell to portray an idea? Touch and sight ...

First things first: capitalization and spelling. Put spell-check on, capitalize your "I"s, and then the story will be fine.

Yes, Tusker, it was a double-rainbow. The premise of this story is that people in psychology say when a sight, like an aurora borealis or a rainbow, is presented to ...

Oh, bluedragon, you're absolutely right about "massaging." Thanks for pointing that out, and, yes, I know the difference; it was just a typo. I thought that the boy was preoccupied ...

In my eyes, this post needs no help. You completely captured that sensation, and took words that I can't elaborate on right out of my mouth. The title is excellent, ...