Abigail_W.

May I suggest that you keep away, in fairy-tale-like pieces, from the "Once upon a time, long, long ago, there lived king named . . ." beginnings? I feel that ...

Such a pretty little poem this is, and -- oh! -- how true. Thank you for writing a love poem that is original, and does not tell the same old ...

Hello! I think that this piece is excellent, and really makes one think. ZaddieCaso pretty much covered and punctuation or spelling errors I would have mentioned, but I have a ...

This is a very pretty poem, although -- dare I say? -- I am beginning to be quite bored with the subject. Yes, yes, we know you love is leaving ...

Hello! I figure I'm not going to start off criticising, so I have to say: the imagery in this poem is outstanding. My real concern in the first "stanza" (if ...

Oh my, this is so true! First things first: this is one of the best poems lacking rhyme that I've ever read. I think this is because you gave the ...

First things first; you did a very nice job with the rhyme scheme. The meter was very good, so, in accordance, the flow was, too. My only concern is that, ...

Oh, my, this is marvelous! When reading poetry, I always try to think to myself, "Now, would any other person in the world think to formulate these exact words in ...

This is a very sweet poem, filled with nostalgia of days long past. It is a very pretty little poem, if I do say so myself. The only problem I ...

I believe this topic is unanimously agreed upon. Nobody want to hear about the lethargic, passive attitude of the poet. Rather, they would like to hear what triggered him not ...

This is a very interesting poem with a lot of meaning to it. However, for flow, I think a few words could be edited. Perhaps you could separate the lines ...

What is the smoke concealing? What are the perfumes of? With a bit more indication, here you would have an excellent poem. I think this would be nice if the ...

Hi Miniauthor, and welcome! I appreciate the detailed descriptions in this piece, although I agree with the post above me. The passive tense does get on my nerves a little, ...

I have one question about fanfiction. When a person is attempting to publish fanfiction, does he/she need permission from the producer of the book, movie, or show the idea is ...

Nothing To Wish For My only suggestion would be that, in the following statement, the use of the word "up" in the second line is unnecessary, as you have already ...