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  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Letter from my Grandpa

    Thank you so much for the review I will look into the development points.

    Jun 2, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Letter from my Grandpa

    Thank you so much for the review, I will edit it in those aspects.

    Jun 2, 2016
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Hey Eyes

    Thanks for the review. i will work on it.

    Apr 11, 2015
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Hey Eyes

    I will tell you the answers to your question. The men killed the tiger with the cause of protecting people and children cos when tigers get old they will be ...

    Nov 9, 2014
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Hey Eyes

    Thank you so much for the review.

    Aug 8, 2014
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Hey Eyes

    Thank you for your review and will adapt your suggestions.

    Aug 8, 2014
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Hey Eyes

    Thank you so much for the review and i have corrected few parts of it as you said.

    Aug 8, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: The Midnight Cafe

    Thank you very much Isha..:)

    Apr 8, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: The Midnight Cafe

    Thanks for the review...:) will surely edit this work..:)

    Feb 7, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: The Midnight Cafe

    Thanks for reviewing again, i was about to edit this today. I will research on how to add all the feelings. Both the stories i wrote were for a short ...

    Feb 6, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: The Rainy Day...

    okay, Thank you...:)

    Feb 6, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: The Rainy Day...

    I needed this kind of reviews actually. Thanks for it. i tried and edited many lines but can you please help me about how to describe the emotions..???because i tried ...

    Feb 6, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: The Rainy Day...

    Thank you for such a good review. I will improve on those areas. I will edit this story in the way it has to be done and will ask you ...

    Feb 5, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: The Midnight Cafe

    Thank you very much for the review SubtleSanity. It was very constructive and i will try to improve all those things. Thank You...:)

    Feb 5, 2014


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