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  • Short Story » Romantic, Satire Re: Match made in Heaven

    Cool story.

    May 17, 2021
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: We Hire Women Only

    Thank you for your comment.The journalist is torn between two choices, - accept the status quo or try to go against the tides. I tried to paint a dichotomous picture ...

    Feb 2, 2021
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: We Hire Women Only

    Thank you for such a wonderful review. I'm very happy to see someone decoding the underlying message of the story. Things like this might actually happen in my country. I've ...

    Jan 20, 2021
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: We Hire Women Only

    Corrections complete. Thanks again.

    Jan 20, 2021
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: We Hire Women Only

    Thank you very much for your review. I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for pointing out the errors. I will correct them as soon as possible.

    Jan 20, 2021
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: We Hire Women Only

    Corrections are done. I also added a few small details so that the story would make sense now. I'm sure you'll enjoy it even more if you read it again.

    Jan 19, 2021
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: We Hire Women Only

    What's that percent 2019 thing? Is that a bug?

    Jan 19, 2021
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: We Hire Women Only

    Thank you for the review. I will correct the errors. Btw, they weren%u2019t recording when they talked. I think I should've made it clear in the story.

    Jan 19, 2021
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: We Hire Women Only

    Guess the location of the story. Edit : That's not necessary, though. How was the story? Was there any plot-hole? Did you notice any form of consistent weakness in my ...

    Jan 19, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Historical Fiction Re: World Peace

    Understood. I think of it as like - there is war. That's why we value peace. If there was no war, the value of peace would've been lost.

    Jan 15, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Historical Fiction Re: World Peace

    Nice poem. I like it. However, I have to be bit pessimistic here. How can we have world peace when people talk about it while preparing for the next war? ...

    Jan 15, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Ayna - The Mirror (Chapter 02)

    Thank you very much for such a wonderful review. I'm going to correct these errors right away. I wonder how they slip past my eyes despite revising the whole writing ...

    Jan 13, 2021
  • Short Story » Humor, Realistic Re: ​Dramatic Effect

    Thank you very much for such a wonderful review. I'm glad you liked it. I was worrying that I'd screw up the story while translating it into English. I'm happy ...

    Jan 2, 2021
  • Short Story » Narrative, Satire Re: Enforced Happiness

    Thank you very much for the wonderful review. I'm glad you liked it. I am also thinking about turning this idea into a novel. However, I don't get enough time ...

    Jan 2, 2021
  • Short Story » Narrative, Satire Re: Enforced Happiness

    Thank you so much for the wonderful review. I'm glad you liked my story.

    Jan 2, 2021


If it wasn't for poetry, I couldn't express myself.
— Rosendorn