Aastha

This was simply W.O.W ! I loved the way you wrote it. this topic has been dealt with a number of times but I really liked your approach. The first ...

It is absolutely wonderful story. For the starters, I loved the names you used. They add to the story a lyrical tone. I loved the line- "Her smell of lavender ...

a beautiful piece. the imagery and the usage of adjectives is apt. every thing seems well matched, neither overtly pensive nor plain descriptive. some very thoughtful lines present themselves througho