AWritersFantasy

As I said to WritersDomain, I realize now that I should've done a better job conveying how desperate Icthus is, but also Keaira's thoughts about what Icthus tells her. I ...

Hi there! Like I said earlier in the post (with all the notes and stuff), I can't take credit for ALL of the names. The only names I came up ...

Oooh. I wanna read moooooore! I don't think it was rushed. I can't wait to read more. ^_^

Haha, mine too. XD I don't really know if I was trying to make it a game in this story, but I was basically trying to use the same sort ...

Hiya! I like Archer, too. Although I'm not sure that I like the fourteen year old version of was nice to experiment with her being this young, though, and it ...

I really liked this chapter. I like that it gives the reader more background about Strick's past that he's obviously not willing to give. I'm definitely wanting to read more. ...

Another awesome chapter! I loved it. And I really like Gietan. I don't have much to say about this chapter that hasn't all ready been said. ^_^ I can't wait ...

Yet another great chapter, and probably one of my favorites so far. I don't have anything specific to point out that hasn't all ready been said. I'm really liking this, ...

I really liked this, too, and agree about giving her more anger, and a bit more dialogue. Other than that, I'm interested in reading more. ^_^

Aah, I figured that it was six- seven with Sorcha. This fourth book is about...Sean and his wife Aisling's (...I don't think I spelt that right) child. So it's Sorcha's ...

Yeah, this is basically what I meant. :) Anything other than "hey, that was good, keep writing," because I tend to like semi-lengthy descriptive type critiques more than a one ...