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Re: Possessing Maya (rewritten!) OLD
This was a good story, but i would have liked more background on maya. who was she? What exactly does it mean to be a being of light? Also, i ...
Aug 3, 2010 -
Re: Duel
i really enjoyed reading this, but i think you could have included a little more detail in the intensity of the battle, or some of the moves that the people ...
Aug 3, 2010 -
Re: Am I
i like this poem, but like some others have said, it didn't flow well, and you shouldn't have put true twice. I love the idea behind it though! the rhyme ...
Aug 3, 2010
