ANate13

Please forgive me if I repeat what was already said in another review, I only skimmed the previous one. I really liked the plot of the story. Also, your setting ...

Okay, let me say, I really quite like this. I think it's an excellent opening. Now, I'm not the best of reviewers, so try and get a lot of others ...

Review here, as requested! THings in bold are what I changed. I really liked the story! Make it a bit longer, though, next time. The brittle stones in the cree ...