ANADIR

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Mission over-accomplished!!

Thanks! I'll be sure to never stop writing! :P

Thanks for the review!! :) I have just realized how gruesome this chapter is after reading it myself after I wrote it! I guess I wasn't in the best mood ...

There is indeed more, and I did put a violence warning on this... XD. I don't especially like the violence, but I want to be descriptive and show how much ...

Thanks! :P Your review was very helpful. I'll be sure to implement everything you told me. :)

Awesome, thanks! I guess I need to get rid of the 'I' Sentences. I'll make sure to do that. :P I'm going to go work on it right now, so ...

XD. It was supposed to add to the feeling of him being slightly crazy. I'm going to go fix that now.

Thanks for the review! This is a first draft, so you were right about that. I'll definitely take your advice to make it a little less wordy. However, the main ...

Thanks! And the beginning was supposed to do that :P. That was an 8 page chapter. Isn't that normally about the size for a chapter? I'm not sure, lol. I ...

Oh man, that's embarrasing. XD Thanks for your feedback! :3

Oh man, that's embarrasing. XD Thanks for your feedback! :3

Oh man, that's embarrasing. XD Thanks for your feedback! :3

Thanks! This is just the first draft, so it's gonna have a few dumb mistakes.XD

Eheh. He was joking.