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ALittleFallofRain

  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: Play

    Thanks! I'm honored you liked it :)

    Oct 4, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: Play

    Thank you! :) You're too kind.

    Oct 4, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Culture Re: Blank

    :) I'm honored that you enjoyed it!

    Oct 4, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Culture Re: Blank

    Thanks! What great advice, you're a great reviewer.

    Oct 4, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Culture Re: Blank

    Thank you! I agree with your edits, you have a good eye for things :)

    Oct 4, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Culture Re: Blank

    Thanks for the review! So happy you liked it :)

    Oct 4, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Culture Re: Blank

    Thanks! &It's funny how first impressions aren't always correct, happy you liked that line! :)

    Sep 8, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: Play

    Thank you! Now it's my turn to smile :) What a great review. I'm happy the poem resonated with you despite the specifics. And I'm happy you didn't mind my ...

    Sep 2, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: Play

    Thank you! And yes, glad you didn't think the poem was too long! I for one thought it might be too lengthy, considering I tend to ramble when I vent.

    Sep 2, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: Play

    Your review was such an encouragement because you obviously have great taste in theatre and life. Thanks!

    Sep 2, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Apprehension

    Yes I tend to get lazy with punctuation in poetry when I'm just scribbling it in my notebook. But maybe if I start typing it up & posting online I ...

    Sep 2, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Apprehension

    That suggestion for the first stanza is brilliant! Those aren't my words so I feel a little cheap just stealing them from you. But I will definitely change goodbyes to ...

    Sep 1, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Apprehension

    Thank you! You really got what I was trying to express through this poem. Happy you liked it, I'm looking forward to posting more.

    Aug 23, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Apprehension

    Haha it's ok! I accidentally submitted a comment on here & just edited it to say first submission blah blah blah. :P

    Aug 23, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Apprehension

    First submission! Enjoy & critique!

    Aug 22, 2013


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