AJSentinel

Here to leave a review! This feels kind of tragic, but that's definitely a good thing. I like the poem because I feel like pretty much anyone can relate to ...

Here to leave a review! I really like the poem! You definitely poured some sorrow into your words, and I've got a suggestion. When you use a metaphor it is ...

The story was well crafted but it seems rather two dimensional. If I were you, I'd start off with an introduction. This is written in first person, so perhaps a ...

That's a pretty dark poem, but good nonetheless. Your use of symbolism and your vocabulary bring your inner struggle to life effortlessly. However, I think what makes this poem the ...