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Re: Secrett Seregreen <edited>prologue & chapter 1
Thanks for the tips *Rubs back of neck* at fist i thought it was pretty harsh, :thud: but that's okay...i have to deal with it i understand. anyway whenyou say ...
Sep 13, 2009 -
Re: Dipped in ink.
Okay it needs some work, i must admit, but it was really sweet. You missed a few punctuation and that's about it. i don't think you butchered the story at ...
Sep 13, 2009 -
Re: Thunder and the Revenant(edited)
Wow thanks guys!
Jun 27, 2009 -
Re: Thunder and the Revenant(edited)
thank you some much Evi! I told you, i'm no cry baby, i take it how it is. i love you reviews, it has helped me sooooo much. i've writen ...
Jun 13, 2009 -
Re: A Single Flaw
nice work. i couldn't get a lot of discription of the characters, so there wasn't much of a feel. there were some grammer mistakes, but i hate correcting that kind ...
Jun 11, 2009 -
Re: Immortal
there were a few mis-spelled words in your story, but other than that it was amazing! you could have explained why Maria was "Dinner's" lover. once again it was truelly ...
Jun 11, 2009 -
Re: An Absence of Rose
Nice Work! your story was great. i couldn't find antthing too bad about it, it's just hard to critisize someone with more experience...bye ~Livi
Jun 10, 2009 -
Re: Little blood red riding hood ch 1&2
this was amzing. you remind me of the way my friend used to write...minus the many grammatical errors, nice work! ~Livi
Jun 9, 2009