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this is a beautiful piece, very dramatic. I kindof get the idea of it but maybe get the literal meaning in there so people understand you. if this is what ...

I think as girls we all expirience this. All the films about vampires and love, werewolves and love. We compare the love we have against this and find it rather ...

This is really powerful and emotional, there is one mistake on line three I think but other than that I would say it's perfect. The simplicity of it and the ...

first I'll start by saying that your creative writing is really good and emotional. Your description is very powerfull and the vocabulary you used is ambitious and to a good ...

despite the few grammar mistakes (which we all make, don't worry) this is amazing, I nearly cried. can I give you a good hint, well read this story over and ...

Wow! So much emotion, I loved it. Your language and speechi s perfect, not using to much is really good. Il ove how we have no idea of the out ...

wow, this is really good ! Its written very quitly should I say, the emotion in it doesn't hit the reader in the face. All the good parts of Harry ...

your work is really clever, you get your point accross, i only hope that times get better for you. I know times are hard, from september i start my last ...

wow, your novel so far accurately shows a soldiers opinion of a coward. as far as i cam see your grammar is brilliant. id really like to see where this ...