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Winie - Thanks for that little dialogue lesson! :D I'm sure it will be very helpful in the future, and of course thank you for taking the time to read ...

I liked it, definitely something i would like to continue reading, it was well written and smooth but a little more character description and in-depth description in general would do ...

The title caught my eye =) love is a very deep subject, but your poem, although very cute could be taken deeper, you can maybe add more stanzas, that would ...