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Wow! I just want to congratulate you. Your story is very interesting, it makes me want to read more of it. And it's a clear indication you have a talent ...

I think you delivered what you had to. It was simple and straightforward. I just wished you would expand more on the difference of the two volcanoes. Or is it ...

First of all, I liked what you want to deliver on the first two verses. I felt how you adored that 'someone' you liked. I also liked how you rhymed ...