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oo yes please! i'll definitely be catching up with all the chapters!

i completely understand, i would definitely be the same. the other paragraphs should be there now %uD83D%uDE02

oh definitely not aha i have really really enjoyed reading this so far, it's so unique and i love your style of writing!

ah sorry i copy & pasted my review in piece by piece from my notes and i think i missed off a paragraph! i'll paste it in in a moment! ...

thank you !

and yeah i named the character rev after myself, my online usernames have involved the name 'rev' for many years so i thought i'd finally use the name in the ...

thank you so much for the review! Hopefully I can answer some of your questions! Correct if I'm wrong, it also tells me that the supermarket and the rocks incident ...

yay i'm glad I was right and not reading too much into things!

oh i see! the rest of your suggestion does actually work much better, my bad aha

thanks! I changed up my reviewing style as I wanted to really appreciate the entirety of a piece, whereas before I think I focused too much on specific parts.

Thank you so much! I think you're right in saying that swim would fit better, but the idea i was trying to portray was his open mouth was hanging the ...

thank you so much! I love how detailed your reviews are!

Thank you!

thank you for the review!

hey there! Just wanted to let you know that it's not really fair to gain reviews by just posting random words!