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Good luck with the finals!!

tysm for the review! I think you're very right about the opening summary. I was trying a bit hard to work on Rev's voice/tone and didn't intersperse it with enough ...

Hmm yes i definitely need to write in more about he escaped! The chapter ended up much longer than I thought than when I went back to edit I just ...

I know this isn't perfect, but hoping you like what I've done with Rev and introducing him to two personal faves!

Oo that sounds like a great idea!

Thank you for your review, Alice!

Honestly, the whole sequence was fun but HARD to write. I knew the crawler had to escape outside (for a later plot point), but figuring out how was so hard. ...

tysm for picking up on that editing error. I went to fix it and i've said 'Lola snapped' way too many times XD The encounter happened in what is kind ...

thank you for the review! I don't really know why I dislike this chapter. I think i was unsure how to bridge between katie's death and lola dealing with the ...

you should definitely consider writing a full-length novel about this! it's an awesome concept

Ugh yeah you’re so right about this chapter. A lot is missing and it doesn’t feel like it makes total sense. I think in my rewrite I’ll have an entire ...

Thank you for the review! I think you actually have a point with Lottie having other patients to attend to. Maybe I should have either had a second nurse she ...

Thank you for your review! I definitely plan on revising it and adding more parts in the future, if not turning it into a novella or novel! Your feedback really ...

there's genuinely so much that sucks about this part ughhhh. This came from an assignment that had a 7,500 word limit and of course i picked a story that i ...

Thank you for your kind review! There are seven chapters previous to this one if you are ever interested to read more