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Thank you for your review! Honestly this is probably my least favourite chapter so far. I wish I had changed it to be more action based, but I really wanted ...

thanks for the review, tikaya! You're so right that aubrey should have some more reactions and internal dynamics towards the wheelchair, and when she is learning from Neus. She IS ...

no worries, there will be another chapter tomorrow! I'm editing it tonight! The connection that aubrey has to kurt & the farm will become apparent in one or two chapter's ...

aahh thank you so much for your kind review. You have no idea how much this warmed my heart! I am so glad you're enjoying it. You're so right, I ...

Thank you for your review! With the CryCast / Ident, the CryCast is the name of the overall broadcast (the person who makes it is called Cry, he gets introduced ...

thank you for your review! The main characters, Kurt, Lola, Aubrey are all around 15 or 16. Rev, Cherry and Malcolm are 16/17, Katie, Pebbles, Bryn, Cai are around 12 ...

thank you for your review! The main characters, Kurt, Lola, Aubrey are all around 15 or 16. Rev, Cherry and Malcolm are 16/17, Katie, Pebbles, Bryn, Cai are around 12 ...

@Tikaya oo that's actually a good idea. It subverts the idea that the girls should be the ones looking after the kids and the boys need to fight. I might ...

Thank you so much for the review! And you know what, you're so right that the next chapter needs to be action-based. I wrote this last year and I've just ...

Thank you so much for the review! I always love your observations. I always imagined Rev probably was eavesdropping, and that he also is what my dad calls a 'wind-up ...

thank you so much for the review. I think you're totally right that a lot of it feels rushed. This was submitted as part of my Master's course, and we ...

Thanks for catching that tense slip. 'She had to be in a hospital' would definitely work better. I think when I wrote it, 'she must be in the hospital' was ...

thank you so much! I'll be looking forward to your thoughts whenever you get the time!

I'm actually thinking that this might work better as chapter one instead of the farm chapter?? let me know your thoughts!

thanks so much! All your feedback is so valuable to me. I really think you're right that some of the exposition and dialogue need to be better worded. I think ...