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Omg thank you for catching thatv!! How embarrassing lol

@junebug, there's a part that says '. Every critique, review, or piece of criticism of this work must include the word 'bananas' at least once' which seems to some sort ...

thank you so much for the review! I appreciate the feedback, and I think you're right about this being a better 2nd chapter (just need to straighten out a lot ...

haha i get that, honestly if that was me my typos would be 10x worse XD

i love the detail that she is younger, so you could still keep that! The writing sounds beautiful in this one!

yay i am very glad i was right and my ramble made sense! And of course, keep writing, a first draft is a first draft for that reason!! Excited for ...

Oo nice! I traced some of my ancestry back to Kent but have never visited! I’m from Dorset way. I realised I never asked where you are from! And nice ...

ah yeah the market sucks right now. my partner is just finishing his masters and we live in a tiny seaside town in wales and there's nothing in his field, ...

Thanks for the heads-up. I am British, but I would not have assumed you meant it as a slur anyway! Where abouts did you spend time in the UK, if ...

ooo i better get to them!

Thank you for your review!!

You got the top grade in the class, of course! You're so right; I think I need to get out of my academic mindset. I've done too much academic reading... ...

It's funny you say that my questions sound like an English teacher because I had an English teacher in university who would make us write questions for the class to ...

Questions you could answer in your review if you wanted to: 1. Why do you think Kurt's grief is shown to be manifested as denial rather than sadness? What does ...

don’t worry about the green room! I’m excited to read this all from the beginning now