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Thank you for your review! With the CryCast / Ident, the CryCast is the name of the overall broadcast (the person who makes it is called Cry, he gets introduced ...

thank you for your review! The main characters, Kurt, Lola, Aubrey are all around 15 or 16. Rev, Cherry and Malcolm are 16/17, Katie, Pebbles, Bryn, Cai are around 12 ...

thank you for your review! The main characters, Kurt, Lola, Aubrey are all around 15 or 16. Rev, Cherry and Malcolm are 16/17, Katie, Pebbles, Bryn, Cai are around 12 ...

@Tikaya oo that's actually a good idea. It subverts the idea that the girls should be the ones looking after the kids and the boys need to fight. I might ...

Thank you so much for the review! And you know what, you're so right that the next chapter needs to be action-based. I wrote this last year and I've just ...

Thank you so much for the review! I always love your observations. I always imagined Rev probably was eavesdropping, and that he also is what my dad calls a 'wind-up ...

thank you so much for the review. I think you're totally right that a lot of it feels rushed. This was submitted as part of my Master's course, and we ...

Thanks for catching that tense slip. 'She had to be in a hospital' would definitely work better. I think when I wrote it, 'she must be in the hospital' was ...

thank you so much! I'll be looking forward to your thoughts whenever you get the time!

I'm actually thinking that this might work better as chapter one instead of the farm chapter?? let me know your thoughts!

thanks so much! All your feedback is so valuable to me. I really think you're right that some of the exposition and dialogue need to be better worded. I think ...

many thanks for your review! I think you're right about the many characters introduced at once. Do you think it might have been better if say one of those characters ...

oops i realised it didn't keep my formatting of indenting new lines and speech, oh well XD

thank you so much for your kind review! I'm so happy you enjoyed it!

thank you so much again payton!!! i love your reviews, and they mean a lot. You're so right again in your interpretations; this is kind of a post-apocalyptic scenario, the ...