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  • Other » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Glimpse: Part One

    Hello there! Che here to review your story :-) First of all I will point out any spelling or grammatical errors or places I think could use improvement. Obviously, some ...

    Oct 19, 2019
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: me/you

    Hi there, Che here for a quick review. I'm still getting back into the swing of reviewing after a break but I'll do my best. First of all, I really ...

    Oct 19, 2019
  • Poetry » Narrative, Mystery / Suspense Re: Forest-Poem ((OLD))

    Hey there! I really enjoyed this little poem. I liked how there was no rhyme scheme or structured form. For me, I thought it reflected the path of the story, ...

    Oct 19, 2019
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: I might love philanthropically

    Hey there! I may be a little rusty at reviewing as I only started up again today after a long break, so I apologise if I do not go into ...

    Oct 17, 2019
  • Poetry » Science Fiction, Realistic Re: ever seen a hat on a table?

    Hello there! I would firstly like to apologise because my review may be a little rusty because I have taken quite a long break from this website and completely forgotten ...

    Oct 17, 2019
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: I quit

    Hey there! 4revgreen here, and firstly I would like to apologise that this review may not be the best because I have had such a long break from the website ...

    Oct 17, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Sleepy Cat

    Hey there! It's been a long time aha, and please forgive me if this review is a little rusty because I've had such a long break and I cannot for ...

    Oct 17, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Love is blooming

    Hi there! This is only my second review after coming back from a break so excuse me if it is a little rusty :-) Firstly, I will go line by ...

    Oct 17, 2019
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Romantic Re: Esoteric poem #1

    Hey! This is my first review in a couple of months so please forgive me if I am a little rusty. First of all, I really loved the structure of ...

    Oct 17, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 3 Weeping Witch

    Hey, Che here for a review! Happy Review day! Let's get into this shall we? Like always, I'll point out all the places I believe you could make some improvements! ...

    Apr 28, 2019
  • Short Story » Realistic, Fanfiction Re: Josephine and Peppurrcorn

    Hey, Che here for a review! This is my first review of review day so congrats :-) First I'll just quote anywhere I think improvements could be made :-) The ...

    Apr 28, 2019
  • Short Story » Health, Supernatural Re: Amelia, or the female Jesus

    Hey, Che here for a review! I meant to review this as soon as I saw and read it but I got completely distracted by other stuff so here I ...

    Apr 21, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Keeper of Secrets

    Hey, Che here for a review! First of all, forgive me if this is pretty lame review but It's currently 12:23am and I just got back from work (Babysitting) But ...

    Apr 17, 2019
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Humor Re: Dead.

    Hey, Che here for a quick review! It was really cool seeing what you did with my prompt! The story I wrote was so different so it was great to ...

    Apr 16, 2019
  • Poetry » Politics, Realistic Re: Two in the Morning

    Hey, Che here for a quick review :-) I don't really have much to critique on this poem, because I personally think it captures the horrific moment in the perfect ...

    Apr 15, 2019


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