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Re: Glimpse: Part One
Hello there! Che here to review your story :-) First of all I will point out any spelling or grammatical errors or places I think could use improvement. Obviously, some ...
Oct 19, 2019 -
Re: me/you
Hi there, Che here for a quick review. I'm still getting back into the swing of reviewing after a break but I'll do my best. First of all, I really ...
Oct 19, 2019 -
Re: Forest-Poem ((OLD))
Hey there! I really enjoyed this little poem. I liked how there was no rhyme scheme or structured form. For me, I thought it reflected the path of the story, ...
Oct 19, 2019 -
Re: I might love philanthropically
Hey there! I may be a little rusty at reviewing as I only started up again today after a long break, so I apologise if I do not go into ...
Oct 17, 2019 -
Re: ever seen a hat on a table?
Hello there! I would firstly like to apologise because my review may be a little rusty because I have taken quite a long break from this website and completely forgotten ...
Oct 17, 2019 -
Re: I quit
Hey there! 4revgreen here, and firstly I would like to apologise that this review may not be the best because I have had such a long break from the website ...
Oct 17, 2019 -
Re: Sleepy Cat
Hey there! It's been a long time aha, and please forgive me if this review is a little rusty because I've had such a long break and I cannot for ...
Oct 17, 2019 -
Re: Love is blooming
Hi there! This is only my second review after coming back from a break so excuse me if it is a little rusty :-) Firstly, I will go line by ...
Oct 17, 2019 -
Re: Esoteric poem #1
Hey! This is my first review in a couple of months so please forgive me if I am a little rusty. First of all, I really loved the structure of ...
Oct 17, 2019 -
Re: Chapter 3 Weeping Witch
Hey, Che here for a review! Happy Review day! Let's get into this shall we? Like always, I'll point out all the places I believe you could make some improvements! ...
Apr 28, 2019 -
Re: Josephine and Peppurrcorn
Hey, Che here for a review! This is my first review of review day so congrats :-) First I'll just quote anywhere I think improvements could be made :-) The ...
Apr 28, 2019 -
Re: Amelia, or the female Jesus
Hey, Che here for a review! I meant to review this as soon as I saw and read it but I got completely distracted by other stuff so here I ...
Apr 21, 2019 -
Re: Keeper of Secrets
Hey, Che here for a review! First of all, forgive me if this is pretty lame review but It's currently 12:23am and I just got back from work (Babysitting) But ...
Apr 17, 2019 -
Re: Dead.
Hey, Che here for a quick review! It was really cool seeing what you did with my prompt! The story I wrote was so different so it was great to ...
Apr 16, 2019 -
Re: Two in the Morning
Hey, Che here for a quick review :-) I don't really have much to critique on this poem, because I personally think it captures the horrific moment in the perfect ...
Apr 15, 2019
