4everyoung

This is the best, most relatable poem I have ever read. Good job, you can go far with talent like this. Never give up, that's my motto.

Love it! Great story plot and I feel like i'm right there next to Cia. She's a great character, and I can't wait for more

I think this is great, but you more need paragraphs. I have to be truthful, I didn't think anyone on this site would post a fanfiction. Not that it's a ...

I like it a lot! It's very descriptive, that's one thing I really like in stories/poems. It makes things stand out and sound prettier.

I really like it, though I didn't understand what was going on in the beginning. I also think some of the sentences are too snippy/short. Some of it could use ...