4evadreamin

I do think you lot should have independance, I never said you shouldn't. I think Australia should too, alot of people believe that, they still have our Queen... But no, ...

You have sparked a massive debate in my house now... Just so you know, my mam reckons you're right to have your independence and my step dad thinks you should ...

Yes I love tea, I'm drinking a cup now, quite strong with three sugars... mmm. No, I don't think it was greed, I can just see the reasons why we ...

I really like the new ending, much more dramatic. It's completely changed though, I'm guessing all isn't lost anymore. Does that not completely change the story? Oh well, it's you ...

The revolutionary war... Nope, we haven't done that yet, in History we learn about Henry the eighth and world wars and stuff like that, we'll probably do it sometime soon ...

Wow, thanks for two really in depth reviews, great suggestons. This is a part of a much longer story, the whole point of it is to introduce the two characters. ...

Thanks, I didn't mention that I wrote this when I was eleven, it's not the best poem I've ever written, I just found it in an old notebook... Glad you ...

Nope, we don't say dude or gnarly... As far as I know I'm full English, except that my surname is Riley which is definately an Irish name, I dunno.

Americans don't speak English, Americans speak American, that's a fact. You don't even spell the same! Why take the u out of colour? And change the e in grey to ...

Yeah I think people do say boff, it's not a real word though, there's this school not far from mine where they call people boffs. I think it's sort of ...

Brilliant! Thank you so much, see, you've mentioned something really good just 'cause I had the cheek to ask you. Of course, you're right, he should just blend in shouldn't ...

I didn't think Americans would understand it at all. I've been to California and they couldn't understand a word I said, I had to talk all posh. Don't Americans say ...

I know it's not perfect, of course it's not perfect, nothing's perfect. Would you please be able to expand on that, I'm not looking for a long review but I ...

Maybe you could try this at the end. The alpha witch opened her enigmatic eyes and surveyed the battlefield around her. Her last thought before the large club plummeting towards ...