4evadreamin

Thanks for reading :P , it was supposed to be a humourous twist at the end! Where abouts in Australia are you from? I have family in Perth. :)

Great review, thanks! I'll try and give them some more backround information. Thanks again. :P

I've just finished editing this, hope you think it's a bit better. It's not that much different, apart from punctuation this time!

Thanks! I'm so glad you thought that, don't worry about me I'm feeling loads better. I actually had to go to shool today because my mam and step dad wanted ...

Oh, thanks. Yeah, I know what you mean now. I'm glad you thought that... No, I've never done anything like that, I was fascinated by the sword fight on the ...

Thanks for the review! :D Great suggestions. Thanks.

Ooooh, yes! That's what it was... TIME. We invented time, or the clock. Where would we be without time? :wink: GMT stands for somewhere in England, yup, you're all hours ...

What's fencing? Maybe it's because I'm blonde. Maybe it's because I'm English, but I don't know that it means... The next installment is driving me crazy, I don't want to ...

Again, I need to do some editing. It is midnight though. It's so annoying, I fell asleep as soon as I got home from school because I was ill, I ...

Yes of course we have different accents! Haven't you heard the Scottish? Well Scotland is just above England and they speak really different. The poem, Our Jon. That's in Geordie ...

Thanks for all the feedback on this... Yeah, it's sort of creepy, because it's a "circle story" (never heard of that before, good way to describe it.) I had to ...

Yeah. I know... My grammar's crap, I've never had a chance to edit though. It's like eleven o' clock at night so I can't do it now. I do that ...

That really helped, a lot. I had no idea about the punctuation in dialogue was supposed to be like that... All the adults on who've reviewed this and they've never ...

Yep I've posted loads, I'm so stupid though I didn't read the rules, I should have done one a day but instead I stuck them all on at the same ...

When I said you I sort of meant all of you... As in Americans... When I was there everyone was drinking tea with ice in it. I think you can ...