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Thank you very much. I really didn't know how those dialogue tags worked, thanks for explaining. 'Putra' translates to son in Hindi; like an Erikson is a son of an ...

Thank you very much. I really didn't know how those dialogue tags worked, thanks for explaining. 'Putra' translates to son in Hindi; like an Erikson is a son of an ...

Thank you for the review! All the character names are not original. Some of the names are from Rigveda, the others I invented. It's based on the theory of Aryan ...

Thank you very much for your review. According to me death took away all his human feelings and he doesn't find the need to run away because he is so ...

Thank your for your helpful review. I did leave many points obscure because I thought it would enable the readers to interpret the story in their own way, but now ...

Thank you for your review. I'm glad that you liked it. I'll use your suggestions in my next work

Thanks you for your feedback. Maybe I'll rewrite it to space it out a little like you suggested

Wow! It was very educative. I'm from India and I didn't know all this, so it was very informative for me. And since I'm from India I didn't know that ...

Very Good! Sounds really nice with all the musical would be awesome if you made it a little longer.

"A million different ways to say the same thing!"--this characteristic of Math has always bothered me; I don't know what's the point of doing that...

Thanks for your advice and critique, people. I've tried to fix some grammar and punctuation errors as advised. Regarding the Telling vs. Showing problem, I still need to learn a ...

I didn't really understand what's meant by this poem. I'm sorry. I'm just stupid I believe. Is it about denying the existence of God?