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  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: What are some good books to read?

    Romance? Boy, do I have books for you. Best romances ever! *ahem* A Company of Swans by Eva Ibbotson The Morning Gift by Eva Ibbotson Wait For Me by An ...

    Jan 22, 2009
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read

    Dragon Flight . Ugh. I tried five million times to read it, but it was just such a waste of paper . . . *inhale, exhale* No offense intended toward ...

    Jan 22, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: To Live

    Hi, Ten. I'm Sunny, and I got to say: I really like this poem. Just a few things: It's C onstant For some I would just un-capitalize "constant" to make ...

    Jan 22, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: The Truth about Lies (working title)

    Came back to check on this, and my answer to your question is . . . *drumroll* KEEP WRITING! Please? I mean, I still love this. I love the interaction ...

    Jan 21, 2009
  • Other » General, General Re: Saving a life

    Great work of non- fiction. Very honest and I felt as though I was reading out of your journal. I liked it a lot. I do have one suggestion, though, ...

    Jan 19, 2009
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Writing is Pain

    Ah, I've definitely had this silent conversation before. And yes, I think most of us here at Young Writers Society write to stay sane. I know I have nothing without ...

    Jan 19, 2009
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Vampire Genre Essay

    Wow. I learned a lot about vamps in film by reading this. I like the way you presented your information; it wasn't boring or choppy. You had a lot of ...

    Jan 19, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Like a Bullet to the Brain - One

    Hey, Ash! Thought I'd come and check out some of your new stuff! This looks great. :) I stared at the paper in my hand, feeling my [s]chest[/s] airway* slowly ...

    Jan 19, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: An Ode to Google

    :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: Awesome. ~Sunny

    Jan 16, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: you me and everyone else

    :shock: If you cut this into, say, three posts, and make the huge paragraphs smaller, I will come back and do a review. But my head just exploded. ~Sunny :smt107

    Jan 13, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: -Inconcessus- Four

    Hey, Ash! I am so excited for this (no joke). Bold is my corrections, italics will be references, and [s]strikethrough[/s] is what it is. :P Smashed [s]against[/s] between the car ...

    Jan 11, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Out of the Chute

    Hey, Ninja! Can't wait to read this. Just give me a moment to come up with a proper review . . . You don't care who is watching you as ...

    Jan 11, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Emotions (Don't Move On Revised and Edited)

    Yeah, I have to say I lost interest in this after the first few paragraphs. There's no point , no mystery or romance. Just a conversation between two friends. This ...

    Jan 10, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: So Untouched Part Three

    Hey, smileforever! This is great; I hope I can help with it. I clutched onto my stomach as I lay on my bed. * An error in the first sentence. ...

    Jan 9, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Depression

    Sometimes I feel hopeless, unwanted, alone. Sometimes I feel like I could jump off a cliff and no one would really care. Sometimes Tylenol looks like a way out of ...

    Jan 9, 2009


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