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I really like this. It was a nice read and the imagery was very good. Keep writing you have a lot of talent.

Thank you very much for the advice, though I apologise for not responding sooner I have been on in a while. I'm kinda regretting no proofreading but at the same ...

Thank you so much for the advice (though I'd like to claim autocorrect for the second one), I suck at grammar and spelling. I also very glad you liked it ...

Wow, thank you so much. I wasn't expecting such positive feedback. This is one of the first times I've shared my work, so it really means a lot to hear ...