*~DesTinEE~*

Hi, my name is Destinee as you can see. This poem just caught my attention. . . I really loved this stanza [quote]I feel the wicked eyes of my captors ...

Hi, I don;t know why but I feel there could have been more, you know? That's just me though, you are the writer. I liked where you were going though ...

Aww how simple and sweet just one thing though I think you made a mistake just a real little one My temperature is over ehating. Did you mean over heating? ...

Actually I really liked where you were going with this poem. I can relate, you know and you described how I have felt before. Isn't that a part of being ...

This is so different... but some how better. I don't understand what it was that kept me reading, to be honest it kind of gave me the chills. I liked ...

This is good, really good! It's short but full of so much feeling! My favorite line Doubled over, she cried Knowing that he had only lied So true they lie ...

How true you are my friend. How can people be so blind? How can they just close their eyes when the truth is to hard to ugly for them to ...