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re-edited!!!!

thanks...chapter 2 ! coming up.

i liek this version better. it gives it more.......cliche to it. great job

ohhhhhhh...i love it, though you could use a ltille more talking. other than that..brilliant!!!!!

Get ready guys cause Chapter 1 is coming your way! I just got to get up a few more points.

well.....i think i did forget about the other nurses....ill fix that. um......yeah iknow about the punctuation. thanx for the advice. ill post chapter 1 this afternoon.

omg! i loved it. keep it up. toodles... -jennie :wink:

oh and im Jennie by the way.

i dare say. i am a bit confused by this poem......but i liked it! Keep writing!

i actually really liked it. although it didnt really have a particular flow to it, i still liked it. the rhyming was just a tad bit off but other than ...

awwwwwwwww...i liked it.

i will be adding the rest of the chapter later on today, i just didnt have time to finish it yesterday. sorry. the poin of me starting out is because ...

ok thanks guys...yes you can print it shanon.

ohh sorry its suppose to say care instead of car...i fixed it though.

really? i loved it!