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Re: ~Remorse~ Prologue: Brooke
Ooooh, I lurve this! [scuse the spelling :D ] I'm excited already! *coco
Jun 11, 2010 -
Re: The Law of the Street [R for language]
Hey DM, coco here! :smt003 Thanks for your email - can't wait for more of this story! *Coco
Jun 4, 2010 -
Re: The Law of the Street [R for language]
This is unbelievably awesome! I was honestly hooked from the start, I haven't read anything like this here so it was incredibly exciting to read. Welcome to YWS and best ...
Mar 26, 2010 -
Re: Of Loss and Love (chp.2) [newly edited]
Thanks, Nike!
Mar 24, 2010 -
Re: Of Loss and Love (chp.10) [newly edited]
Thanks so much guys. As usual your reviews were worth the wait :D
Feb 27, 2010 -
Re: There's something out there;
Much better lol. Ok, now for my review. :arrow: the branches whipped my face and my exposed arms - i think it would flow better if you say: the branches ...
Feb 4, 2010 -
Re: Of Loss and Love (chp.9) [newly edited]
Thanks so much, guys! I really appreciate it!
Feb 1, 2010 -
Re: Alice Who Lives Down the Rabbit Hole; Ch. 2
Everything that I was going to say has been said already. I'll just repeat how brilliant this story is, it's creepy and intriguing. I can't wait for more!
Jan 26, 2010 -
Re: The Royal Mistake
LOL! I love this! :lol:
Jan 22, 2010 -
Re: Ignore this
Since you've had some great reviews and ideas for improvement I'll just say how much I adore this story. You write so beautifully and I cannot wait for more! *coco
Jan 19, 2010 -
Re: Of Loss and Love (chp.8) [newly edited]
thanks so much for the reviews guys!
Jan 12, 2010 -
Re: Not my Own Chapter 1
much MUCH better! I'm looking forward to reading the rest now :wink:
Dec 9, 2009 -
Re: Forbidden. Horror. Part One. (Feedback Appreciated)
I like this! You wrote it really well. Not much else to say other than bring on chapter 2!
Dec 8, 2009 -
Re: (Unnamed) Chapter three
Hi, again, sorry my first review didn't include much. I thought Makko’s perspective was really good, I liked that part, it really added some tension to the story and it ...
Dec 7, 2009 -
Re: Of Loss and Love (chp.6) [newly edited]
Thanks so much!
Nov 26, 2009